Comments Back From Draft 2 (Feb. 03)

Writing draft number two was hard because you have to organize your thoughts and think about how you're going to say certain things. On my paper I didn't have very much feedback. I hope that means my paper is okay because the girl next to me has feedback all over her page. I just feel a little nervous now. I like the way you're giving feedback on my paper. It lets me know exactly where the problems is and what I need to fix. I thought you would comment on how I worded different sentences or how I needed to be more clear. I did not get very many comments on sentence structure, but I got some on spacing between paragraphs, to erase me name on the top of the paper, and a couple grammar mistakes. I am just going to keep looking over my paper and hopefully it is what you want.